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June 27, 2019 / By Angelle
Question: The Outsiders Heroes Essay When we often hear or say the word heroes we refere to superman, batman, or even spiderman. But do we come home everday and say " man, spiderman I love you! you killed him! the evil villian hahaha" The answer is no. Spiderman is probably busy with Mary Jean not even thinking about you just himself. A real hero is somone that can be anyone, wheather it's a sinner or a saint a poor person or a rich person or a normal person like you and I. It is a person that risks their own bodies or even lives to save or help another person. Somebody like Johnny, Ponyboy and ofcourse Dally not only are they heroes but they are reformed and brave and also Faith The brothers were very reformed they have abondoned an evil manner of living and following a good one. From being a greaser to being a hero is such a good improvment. who said you have to be perfect to be a hero? who said you have to be a goodie goodie to be a hero? Nobody ever said that because anyone from anywhere can be a hero. They boys did an excellent job of being reformed from saving kids from a fire where they could of died. Therfore it was Johnny's fault because he left a ciggratte and fell asleep and the church went on fire. They then saved the kids which is a real good definiton of Reformed. The three brothers were also brave to go into the dangourous fire and save the kids. Johnny, Ponyboy and Dally could of nearly died in the fire. They were so brave to step up and run to save the kids that were unaware of what was going on, The boys are such a great rolemodel for kids too because just because your all west side doesn't mean you can't be a hero you just have to step up into it and be the brave one to move forward. Faith is so important the three boys moved forward to a better spot. They Had the faith to just go forward to step in to that church save thoes kids and work as a team. Sometimes we belive things that we don't want to belive that's why moving forward is a great thing to belive and do. Reformation, Bravery, Faith.Three amazing quilites Of a hero. You don't have to be rich and famous just be yourself if anything bad happens Return fully to God and he will fill your cup until it runs over with the peace and mind of knowing you ARE forgiven. Just keep your head up and always relize what your doing and look at your postive sides when you are in a negative suitation. I DONT have spell checker my programs are expired:( THANK YOU SOO MUCH I WISH I CAN GIVE YOU ALL POINTS THANKS SOO MUCH YOU REALLY ARE THE BEST! AND THANKS TO ALL THE PEOPLE THAT ARE NOT RUDE
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Willis Willis | 5 days ago
If you had an available email address I could have sent this. I'm including the whole thing with corrections. Watch for the "NOTES." Print out this copy and compare it to what you have then revise as needed. One key in writing an essay: explain things as if you're telling someone (like me) who has no clue what the story is about. (NOTE: You need a strong thesis statement. If you don't know what that is it's typical the last sentence in the first paragraph that tells the reader what will be discussed in the rest of the essay. Stupid example: My dog makes a great pet because he's obedient, he greets me at the door, and he's there when I need a friend to talk to. You'd have the intro that ends with the thesis, then a paragraph about the dog being obedient, one about how he greets you at the door, one about him being there when you need to talk, then you'd end with the conclusion which summarizes what you said. This is not a place to add new details that were not discussed. When we often hear or say the word heroes we refer to Superman, Batman, or even Spiderman. Do we come home everyday and say, "Man, Spiderman I love you! You killed the evil villain"? The answer is no. Spiderman is probably busy with Mary Jean, not even thinking about you--just himself. A real hero can be anyone: a sinner, a saint, a poor person, a rich person, or a normal person like you and me. A hero is someone who risks his or her body or life to save or help another person. Not only are Johnny, Ponyboy, and Dally heroes, they are reformed and brave and also Faith. (NOTE: I have no idea what you meant with this sentence. Something must be missing.) The brothers were very reformed. They had abandoned an evil manner of living and started following a good one. From being a greaser to being a hero is such a good improvement. The boys did an excellent job of being reformed. Johnny lit a cigarette and fell asleep, setting the church on fire. The four heroes saved the kids which is a real good definition of Reformed. Who said you have to be perfect to be a hero? Who said you have to be a goodie-goodie to be a hero? Nobody ever said that because anyone from anywhere can be a hero. (NOTE: This paragraph doesn't make sense.) The three brothers were also brave to go into the dangerous fire and save the kids who were unaware of what was going on. The boys are such a great role model for kids. Just because you're all west side (NOTE: wrong neighborhood or looked down upon) doesn't mean you can't be a hero. You just have to step into it and be the one brave enough to move take action. Faith helped the three boys improve their lives. (NOTE: What did their faith have to do with them running in to save those kids? Courage, yes. Faith? Faith that God would protect them and the children? Or was it that they couldn't let those children die, and adrenaline got them through?) They had the faith to rush into that church and save those kids, working as a team. Sometimes we believe things that we don't want to believe. That's why moving forward is a great thing to believe and do. (The last two sentences don't make sense. What do you mean?) Reformation, bravery, faith: three amazing qualities of a hero. You don't have to be rich and famous: just be yourself. If anything bad happens return fully to God and He will fill your cup until it runs over with the peace of mind of knowing you ARE forgiven. Just keep your head up and always realize what you're doing and look at your positive traits when you are in a negative situation. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/protestant_... Reformation means change. Not only is it religion, it's also about changing one's life.
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Willis Originally Answered: Grammer help?
Inflections - prefixes/suffixes applied to root words to turn them into parts of speech. Genitive - Expresses possession (like "yours," "mine," "his," etc.) Dative - Expresses the indirect object ("to him," "to her," etc.) Nominative - Expresses the subject or the predicate nominative Accusative - Expresses the direct object Declension - adding special prefixes or suffixes to nouns, adjectives, adverbs, or pronouns in order to change the case (i.e. to make them express nominative, genitive, dative, etc.) Ablative - Expresses separation, or movement away from something Case forms - A "case" is a form of a noun, adjective, pronoun, or adverb. A noun, for example, is in the nominitive case when it is the subject of a sentence (i.e. "BOB is a mailman..."). Vocative: direct address ("hey, BOB - how are you?") Genitive: Possession ("that is BOB'S car") Ablative: Separation ("that letter is from BOB") Dative: Indirect object ("I sent that to BOB") Locative: Location ("the hamburger is in BOB now") Instrumental: Mode or means ("I was hit by BOB") Accusative: Direct object ("I hit BOB with a baseball bat") I am assuming that you are studying Latin. In Slavic languages you will see seven cases. Latin combines the Dative, Locative and Instrumental into the Dative case. Greek combines Dative Locative and Instrumental into the Dative, and Geninitve and Ablative into the Genitive. Periphrastic: A gerund + dative case. Used to express "ought" or "must" in Latin.

Sefton Sefton
When we often hear or say the word heroes we refer to superman, batman, or even Spiderman. But do we come home everyday and say " man, Spiderman I love you! you killed him! the evil villain ha-ha" The answer is no. Spiderman is probably busy with Mary Jean not even thinking about you just himself. A real hero is someone that can be anyone, whether it's a sinner or a saint a poor person or a rich person or a normal person like you and I. It is a person that risks their own bodies or even lives to save or help another person. Somebody like Johnny, Pony boy and of course Dally not only are they heroes but they are reformed and brave and also Faith The brothers were very reformed they have abandoned an evil manner of living and following a good one. From being a greaser to being a hero is such a good improvement. who said you have to be perfect to be a hero? who said you have to be a goodie goodie to be a hero? Nobody ever said that because anyone from anywhere can be a hero. They boys did an excellent job of being reformed from saving kids from a fire where they could of died. Therefore it was Johnny's fault because he left a cigarette and fell asleep and the church went on fire. They then saved the kids which is a real good definition of Reformed. The three brothers were also brave to go into the dangerous fire and save the kids. Johnny, Pony boy and Dally could of nearly died in the fire. They were so brave to step up and run to save the kids that were unaware of what was going on, The boys are such a great role model for kids too because just because your all west side doesn't mean you can't be a hero you just have to step up into it and be the brave one to move forward. Faith is so important the three boys moved forward to a better spot. They Had the faith to just go forward to step in to that church save those kids and work as a team. Sometimes we believe things that we don't want to believe that's why moving forward is a great thing to believe and do. Reformation, Bravery, Faith. Three amazing qualities Of a hero. You don't have to be rich and famous just be yourself if anything bad happens Return fully to God and he will fill your cup until it runs over with the peace and mind of knowing you ARE forgiven. Just keep your head up and always realize what your doing and look at your positive sides when you are in a negative situation.
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Neil Neil
When we often hear or say the word heroes we refer to Superman, Batman, or even Spiderman. But do we come home everyday and say "Man, Spiderman I love you! You killed him! The evil villain hahaha." The answer is no. Spiderman is probably busy with Mary Jane not even thinking about you just himself. A real hero is someone that can be anyone, whether it's a sinner or a saint, a poor person or a rich person, or a normal person like you and me. It is a person that risks their own bodies or even lives to save or help another person. Somebody like Johnny, Ponyboy and, of course, Dally. Not only are they heroes but they are reformed, brave and faithful. The brothers were very reformed they have abandoned an evil manner of living and following a good one. From being a greaser to being a hero is an improvement. Who said you have to be perfect to be a hero? Who said you have to be a goody goody to be a hero? Nobody ever said that because anyone from anywhere can be a hero. They boys did an excellent job of being reformed from saving kids from a fire where they could of died. Therefore, it was Johnny's fault because he left a cigarette and fell asleep and the church went on fire. They then saved the kids which is a really good example of reformation. The three brothers were also brave to go into the dangerous fire and save the kids. Johnny, Ponyboy and Dally could of nearly died in the fire. They were so brave to step up and run to save the kids that were unaware of what was going on, The boys are such a great role model for kids too because just because you're all west side doesn't mean you can't be a hero; you just have to step up into it and be the brave one to move forward. Having faith is so important; the three boys moved forward to a better spot. They had the faith to just go forward to step in to that church save those kids and work as a team. Sometimes we believe things that we don't want to believe; that's why moving forward is a great thing to believe and do. Reformation, Bravery, and Faith are three amazing qualities of a hero. You don't have to be rich and famous, just be yourself if anything bad happens return fully to God and he will fill your cup until it runs over with the peace of mind knowing you are forgiven. Just keep your head up and always realize what you are doing and look at the positive side of a negative situation.
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Kieran Kieran
When we often hear or say the word heroes we refer to superman, batman, or even Spiderman. But do we come home everyday and say “man, Spiderman I love you! You killed him! The evil villain hahaha" The answer is no. Spiderman is probably busy with Mary Jean not even thinking about you just himself. A real hero is someone that can be anyone, whether it's a sinner or a saint a poor person or a rich person or a normal person like you and I. It is a person that risks their own bodies or even lives to save or help another person. Somebody like Johnny, Ponyboy and of course Dally not only are they heroes but they are reformed and brave and also Faith The brothers were very reformed they have abandoned an evil manner of living and following a good one. From being a greaser to being a hero is such a good improvement. Who said you have to be perfect to be a hero? Who said you have to be a goodie to be a hero? Nobody ever said that because anyone from anywhere can be a hero. They boys did an excellent job of being reformed from saving kids from a fire where they could have died. Therefore it was Johnny's fault because he left a cigarette and fell asleep and the church went on fire. They then saved the kids which is a real good definition of Reformed. The three brothers were also brave to go into the dangerous fire and save the kids. Johnny, Ponyboy and Dally could have nearly died in the fire. They were so brave to step up and run to save the kids that were unaware of what was going on, The boys are such a great role model for kids too because just because your all west side doesn't mean you can't be a hero you just have to step up into it and be the brave one to move forward. Faith is so important the three boys moved forward to a better spot. They had the faith to just go forward to step in to that church save those kids and work as a team. Sometimes we believe a thing that we don’t want to believe that’s why moving forward is a great thing to believe and do. Reformation, Bravery, Faith. Three amazing qualities of a hero. You don't have to be rich and famous just be yourself if anything bad happens Return fully to God and he will fill your cup until it runs over with the peace and mind of knowing you ARE forgiven. Just keep your head up and always realize what you’re doing and look at your positive sides when you are in a negative situation. I don't about grammar but Answers provides a spell check tool. (I used Microsoft Word to spellcheck yours.)
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Kieran Originally Answered: Please answer this quickly grammer beasts, I'm in need of help!?
you mixed up your tenses you started off with past tense and then moved into the present tense at the end of your paragraph. it should stay in the past tense. so "Pericles' Funeral Oration speech gave a great example to the Athenians on how they should think, should appreciate what others do for them, and also tried to provide comfort for others" also, you might want to revise that thesis to make it more stylistically correct (make it sound and flow better) Perhaps something like "Pericles' Funeral Oration speech was a great example to the Athenians on their thought process, how they shouldn't take for granted what others do for them, and it also attempted to provide comfort for others." or something along those lines. simple changes in words, making the sentence's intent more clear can dramatically improve the overall quality of the essay. I would suggest you improve your vocabulary so you have a wider range of words to use.
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