Topic: I need another main event for this story, help please (creative answers please)?
April 22, 2019 / By Abidah Question:
My story is about these two little kids selling lemonade and this ninja old lady steals their cups. They battle and the kids lose so they go to the store to buy some more, but the store is out.
I already have the conclusion written, I just need a few more main events to put in the story. It has to be a page and a half long with 12 font & so far it's not even a full page.
Please help, this is due tomorrow! The more creative the ideas, the better! I'm open to anything just make it somehow fit in the story and keep it clean.
Ha, I'm like twelve.. and this is for english class. It's a really gay project, but oh well :)
Sidney | 3 days ago
Possibly a small part where they journey somewhere to get some cups, but they find out there were some at home all along? something along those lines
I love creative writing =D
Wow, that's one mundane story!
Lemonade cups get stolen? That's really not dramatic at all... Sorry.
If you need to keep the same story, then you need to shake it up to make it interesting.
And wtf, an old ninja lady?! Lol!
I think you can make this funny, add in something like, the ninja lady also bought all the cups form the shop, so to get lemonade cups, the kids have to sneak into the old ninja ladys house and "borrow" them.
HELP HELP HELP HELP
I NEED OPINIONS!
What kind of story is that?? Bwahaha. What if another lemonade stand competes with the kids, and they steal all their customers?